The neon signage flashed its wares
in shadows on wall and chair
as she alone sits on the bed
for him to stand and stare.
With downward glance she slides her hand
to pull at lacy tights
that slither silky sun kissed legs
with a virtue that excites.
Yet each button becomes a lie
to keep his eyes aswim
on juicy fruits he’d taste so soon
from orchards cut for him.
For her husband sits alone at home
uncaring now of games
like kiss and tell he once did play
to make their love as flames.
She’d tell with breathless scant regard
of every harvest scope
so worthless masks became the love
that numbed the pain of hope.
Now unpeeled, she stands and looks at last
to plead in mellow tones
that ripen flesh is left unbruised
and waits for naked groans.
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…now unpeeled…very good piece. one looks on…
lovely scenario…. here’s my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/03/12/broken-home/
loved how you painted this tale. it has a wonderful flow.
great job.
loved the story told. my favorite stanza, for both form and content is the third one. loved the near-perfect meter and pure, feeling unforced, rhyme in it. lot to work with here if ever you’d like to tinker it into purest ballad
I’d thank you for your fine efforts at my favorite form
Monty / bummy
welcome to JP…
lovely poem,
A+
Wow! Outstanding write!
Took a tale and turned it on me! great write, good rhythm, well done
Nice !
I love twisted tales !
I absolutely loved this John, must say, the subject matter isn’t traditionally balladic but neither is mine. I really enjoyed reading, the sometimes uncomfortable tale of love, seduction and disappointment!
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